I received my page proofs for "Inclination," my Asimov's story, in the mail last night. Damn, asphalteden, but you run a tight ship! I appreciate having precise instructions on how to mark the copy.
Rereading parts of the story on the train this morning, there were certainly sentences I wanted to tear down and rebuild from scratch. (Don't worry, Brian—I will resist manfully.) But I was relieved to see that the story could still hold my interest.
